Over the past couple of weeks we have been working on editing a rough cut for the documentary project.
We decided first to first import and label all footage and sounds so that we can become familiar with the content. We can also identify a structure and be as efficient as possible not having to look through all the footage to find what we need. However, we did not realize the amount of time it would take for us to import the footage. Adding to this was that what we first received was only half of the total footage, excluding sounds as well.
These issues, as well as the suite often being occupied, meant that by last week's session we had only imported and labelled the footage (and most of the sound files) - with no rough cut to present for feedback.
Whilst labelling the footage we used abbreviations to help us sort it, such as GV for good visuals or BS for bad sound. With the amount of footage we would be dealing with we felt it was necessary to try and keep some order and so we further split the sounds and video into bins corresponding to the scenes they were from, such as the park, the Riverside or the Rutland.
I also listened through each interview in the film and transcribed sound-bytes from them (with their respective time-codes). This will make navigating the footage much easier when we come to edit, and also allows us to plan a structure for the film before starting our assembly. I did the same thing last year for our documentary project, although with that I transcribed it fully including pauses, stresses, and all speech. However this time I felt this was not necessary.
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Although we are now trying to catch-up and create a fine cut for next week's session, it was useful to hear the feedback on someone else's edit before we have started, as a number of useful tips were given out regarding structure and general practice:
- Use Addie at the start and stay with him in the story to create empathy.
- Do NOT use repeated footage - even if it just looks the same.
- Start the film with the poetry to shock the audience.
- Always look for strong out points - ends of sentences or phrases can dictate editing and hide production. Don't always look for obvious way out.
- Listen to the sound of your edit on its own.
- First section go out on 'Looking for adventure' - cut to crowds in Rutland/Riverside. Rhetorical questions are a good way to get out.
- Montage rule of three to establish setting.
- Create subtext in documentary if it isn't already there.
- Showing people thinking is a good way to create empathy.
Yesterday we started our rough cut after I finished labeling the rest of the sound files. We followed the advice of cutting to the Rutland pub after Addie says the line 'Why are we always looking for adventure?' in his poem. To try and ease that transition we tried out a few ideas - such as using the audience applause to bridge the two scenes.
Eventually we found a good sound-byte at the start of the night where Addie introduces people to the event and then begins reciting his other poem. We then tried fading the sound away and cutting to Addie writing in his bedroom, providing context about him and what we are seeing in the Rutland.
From here we will use the sound-bytes I transcribed to form Addie's personal introduction, and then take us back to the Rutland to meet the other poets. We quickly drafted an idea for the structure of the film in sections:
- Addie's poem in the park
- Rutland introduction.
- Addie's personal introduction - bedroom interview.
- Rutland poems and interviews with other poets.
- Addie talking about his inspirations in nature - park/bedroom footage
- Riverside poems and interviews
- Addie talking about future of poetry scene - amphitheater sunset.
In working with the footage independently yesterday and starting out rough cut we also learnt a number of important techniques with AVID: showing audio wave-forms, key-framing and fading out audio, reducing volume by sound or per media, adding an edit to split footage and a better understanding of how to drag and overwrite or use the ripple tool. Most of these techniques were not covered in the taught workshops, and so we have been mainly looking online to solve any problems which arise.